I LOVE #4 and an hesitant to have you go back into it BUT it is photographed so it could be an interesting experiment to see how far you can take it. #5 also have a beautiful start, my recommendation with that piece would be to see if there is anything you can do with the lights to try and offset an otherwise very central composition. Perhaps something in the extreme foreground to pull attention away from the extinguisher? Also #5 is a tad blurry rephotograph when you can. Great Job!
I LOVE #4 and an hesitant to have you go back into it BUT it is photographed so it could be an interesting experiment to see how far you can take it. #5 also have a beautiful start, my recommendation with that piece would be to see if there is anything you can do with the lights to try and offset an otherwise very central composition. Perhaps something in the extreme foreground to pull attention away from the extinguisher? Also #5 is a tad blurry rephotograph when you can. Great Job!
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